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Bleep... bleep

This isn't terrible, but I wish you hadn't used that crappy sound effect whenever a speech bubble popped up. It was so annoying after the first couple times. Otherwise, it's okay.

Nice

I could see this being, like, used for a trailer for Death Note or something. It was well made and I liked it. Great work.

Not bad

I don't think it truly captures the L4D motif, but it isn't a bad start. I would like to have seen multiple vids, like one for each chapter of a "campaign" so to speak. Could have done more with it and we would have seen more of the other 3 characters.

A pause button wouldn't have been bad so I could read all the stuff on the wall or in that text. A rewind too, so if I miss it, I can go back and look at it again.

And in response to TAN777, L4D isn't that depressing since they get rescued, like every single god damned campaign. Yes, the rescues fail, but that's just a device to keep the game going more than anything. Plus, zombie apocalypse is fun. Ellis agrees with me on that one. Depressing, no. Occasionally aggravating, yes.

Great message

But controls are really glitchy for me. Laggy jumps and sometimes I just won't move at all. Dunno what's up with that.

Lacks your usual flare

Good to see you're still alive. Too bad that you seem to have lost your luster. May I assume that most of the better quality work is going to the website these days since we haven't seen you here in about a year? It's a real shame because your work was beginning to get good for a while.
I won't go into as much detail with this one. You know what the problems are with this one as well as I do. No context like your usual stuff. The girl makes no sounds which kills the mood a little. The artwork is even more cartoony than your usual stuff. It seems there was a great lack of effort on this work and I assume this was thrown together to remind us here at Newgrounds to visit your site.
Nevertheless, I'm grateful to see you are still at work. Do drop by here and visit more often.

Better Indicators

One thing I like about good point-n-click games is that they'll at least indicate what you can and can't click on by changing the mouse or highlighting the object. While that does seem to make it easy, it reduces frustration when I feel like I've clicked on every available spot in a given area and have not been able to advance in quite some time.
Another issue I'm having is that connect the dots puzzle. I'm sure it's easy once you get the idea of it, but that's the thing, we haven't really had much of a clue as to the idea of it. It skips random numbers and makes an incoherent mess of scribbles. I thought it might make a part of the picture I found in the coat, but it doesn't come close. Perhaps this game could be aided by a hint system or perhaps link to a walkthrough for the thickest of us.
Also, why can't I just click and drag an item in the slidey puzzle? Why do I have to reclick it to indicate I want to drag it to another space? Seems unnecessary. Kind of like an eraser that erases the entire drawing you've made when all I want to do is erase a single line or something. Minor controls could definitely use a little work.
In short, it looks good, but doesn't play the best. A few tweaks and it will be just fine. :D